Thank you for taking the time to not only reading, but writing a well thought out review of my book. I have a more updated version to be uploaded to this site, but I did add the warning as you suggested.
Thanks for the review. Although I can't say I am much of a consistent author as I haven't written anything for basically a year, I appreciate the advice. If I find some time to do so, I will edit the chapters for better readability. Also suggestions for text box colour choices would be appreciated. As white seems to not work as well as I thought it did? I imagine it has something to do with the web theme though.
With such a vast number of stories to read, where does one start? It seems quite daunting.
The tagging system is a mess, and the rankings or star ratings don't necessarily reflect a story's actual quality. As such, I have decided to try out whatever stories the "Random Series" function serves me.