Guys, I want to rewrite ARC 1, like completely. I thought of deleting some flashbacks and side character's interactions, add Ziek's appearance from ARC 3 to ARC 1 instead. You could point out what you hated or what you think would be better, etc. Anything.
Example: "I also felt it lacked luster lately but now is better, I just wishes that our ML show in next chapter. It feels kinda wrong when he isn’t with Bing Shi." RaniaSaad3.
I really want to improve. Thank You!