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SpremWhale · Nov 26, 2022

Has anyone else noticed how many followers rsw1321 has gotten in the last 6 hours?clear.pngclear.png .

SweetRoll · Nov 27, 2022

Hopefully they see that and realize that there is still immense support and desire for this story

SpremWhale · Nov 27, 2022

One can only hope.

Shadowdisciple · Nov 26, 2022

Hope you see these comments about your fans loving the story and realize how good you are as a writer. People don't get to chapter 93 without getting invested in the characters. When trying to advance character development you need to have scenes that get people fired up in both good and bad ways. All the best stories have had moments just like yours where one of the main characters did something controversial. I hope you show us all how that chapter would have advanced your story.

ShrikeDeCil · Nov 26, 2022

Joined for: I mourn. This is where "Porn" and "Art" have an **inevitable** collision. It's tough to show *character development* if you can't show from where the characters are coming. Irrelevant for porn. But. You did an *astounding* job with Hugh and Nat. And Julia overcoming her driving-issue-of-the-moment, her cancer, that was well done as well. I ddn't se the ch that attr rage, but you've foreshadowed sufficiently Julia's pers exp. I'd like to see more of your writing. Period. 500?Sh

ShrikeDeCil · Nov 26, 2022

On another note, hey! No!

... At the very least *after* we see Julia's chainmail!

I can't see her 'shy, hiding key bits' sorts of things, but an action scene where she's one-leg-forward and sword-slicing-across could be PG ... ish.

SpremWhale · Nov 26, 2022

I  hope you keep writing this story, I was really enjoying it and i think a lot of other people were as well.

XenophonHendrix · Nov 26, 2022

I just swung by to read _The ENF System_ . I'm sorry to see the story go, and I hope it comes back. You are a good writer with strong characterization and smooth prose. It looks like some persons who read for wish fulfillment criticized you for not meeting their expectations, in other words, their personal kinks. If so, I suggest you ignore them. You are too skilled of a writer to worry excessively about those who read the most shallowly but make the most noise.

Season · Nov 26, 2022

Had been a good story was well done hope it comes back some people just shouldn’t read it if they are so easy by stuff you had warned them so why were they reading it still just to pick at parts they don’t like 

SpremWhale · Nov 26, 2022

I Didn't even get to the read the chapter. What happened exactly?

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SpremWhale · Nov 26, 2022

Oh, so Hugh knew about it and even gave her a quest?I don't see how anyone could call that NTR.

ShipTeaser · Nov 26, 2022

Yeah it was one of the ones she asked him not to alter. Personally I would have preferred her videoing it for Hugh, so that it felt much more... inclusive... of him, but yeah, i agree. Long-term i was hoping Julia would get that sweet character development, but alas... we won't get to see now.

Still, i get the author's sadness. I get it's damn disheartening and makes one want to just jack it in, but his hard work is already done so...

SpremWhale · Nov 26, 2022

I agree completely

ShrikeDeCil · Nov 26, 2022

So... personal turn-off from the 'porn' direction, but setting up character development from the 'art' perspective, imo.

sketerpot · Nov 26, 2022

The comments you get on any given chapter aren't a representative sample of people's opinions: they're the people who got enough of a bee up their bonnets to write something. It can be hard to remember that when the comments just seem so much more salient than the number of people quietly enjoying your story, but it's still true.

Anyway, it's sad to see the story vanish -- it was something genuinely special! -- and sadder to see that the complaints got you down. Hope you're doing well.

Rocag · Nov 26, 2022

I really do hope you bring the story back.  I admit I wasn't sure about the last chapter either but I still do want to see where you are going with it.  Don't let the criticism get you down, I promise more people are enjoying it.

ShipTeaser · Nov 26, 2022

Yeah, like I said in my comment, while I had some minor reservations, you hadn't steered us wrong so far so was definitely willing to see where you took it...

Oh well... yeah, i agree with a lot of the comments below. Stick to your guns if you feel it's how the story should go, it's how the story should go, deleting it just puts your hard and very good effort to waste *sadface*

Oldnavy · Nov 26, 2022

Loved this story.

DareDaemon · Nov 26, 2022

The story was good, please don't let the haters win.

Ses · Nov 26, 2022

I also signed up on scribblehub to express sadness that this story was deleted. I've been checking it multiple times a day ever since it got recced on QQ. I'm sorry I didn't sign up earlier if lack of comments killed it, I didn't want to sign up to a scribblehub account. If you have to cancel it that's fine, but please don't delete it.

ElderDrae · Nov 26, 2022

I just caught up, am sad about deletion, whatever the cause, and hope it comes back.  Seeing the deletion prompted me to make a Scribblehub account to to write this.

This was the best story I have read on Scribblehub, and a great take on system overall. I love the "what the heck" feeling of the characters trying to figure it and each other out.  The worldbuilding is obviously still early days yet and makes me want to learn more.  Could say more, but 500 char limit.

Wish you well in any event.

SweetRoll · Nov 26, 2022

agreed

mja · Nov 26, 2022

Bruh you could have just changed part of the last chapter and it would have been fine, or you could just rewrite chapter you have a lot of fans and you still do it would be a shame to delete the entire novel just because of a few comments. believe me there are more people wanting to read your story than people who hate it.

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Kaithar · Nov 26, 2022

@Mortuos ... it's a weird double standard to respect Hugh for being monogamous while also having the girls being promiscuous, something that the characters themselves seem to have noticed.  Don't just call everything misogynist when people have different opinions about fictional characters.

Mortuos · Nov 26, 2022

as said before. Julia and Hugh aren't in a relationship. Nat and Hugh are.

Nat and Hugh clearly defined that its okay if Nat and Julia do that. 

Julia doing that has nothing to do with Hugh. 

the assumption that she is "his" because of the system is clearly misogyny. 

also. 

there's a German saying: getroffene Hunde bellen. 

Kaithar · Nov 26, 2022

I didn't say they were. I also didn't say she was his. The complaint is that the expectation wasn't that we were going to watch Julia with other guys. Honestly, that doesn't even mean there was an expectation that she'd do things with Hugh, one doesn't automatically lead to the other.

Kaithar · Nov 26, 2022

The reason there's an expectation is because that's how these stories usually go. It's a work of fiction, one orientated fairly heavily about women (consensually) in situations they find humiliating... I'm not sure this is the right place to make what sounds like a complaint about how real women are treated.

Andrei_Sokolov · Nov 26, 2022

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