1. The plot is simple and there is nothing wrong with that if the characters, world building, or the story make up for it. Unfortunately, there is no character that pique my interest (the MC is generic, the supports are one dimensional, and the antagonis is not interesting).

2. The world building so far is not exciting to explore.

3. The story is confusing (a random ancestor appear to start the story for no reason and a random box with a human skeleton).

Due to 500 words limitation, I can't even respond properly.

I apologize if my critism is harsh and hurtful, I try to be as clear as possible.

Given I have read 12/15 chapters available I thought I had read enough to make a comment, so I did.

It's okay. Thank you for your honest words. I understand your points, but I hope you can still give it a chance and read until chapter 4.1 to see if it captures your interest, as the plot will become more solid and the characters will become more nuanced.

Since this is my first series, I acknowledge that the way I present the story may not be perfect, particularly in the mystery genre where it's hard to decide what to reveal and what to withhold. However, I appreciate your valuable input as it will help me grow as a better writer. Thank you.