Hello, I just wanted to let you know ALL there chapters I have read so far have [edited] in the title and there are many errors. For instance some words aren't correct and it's a consistent mistake (e.g., "whit" instead of "with"). I know no one is perfect. However, I thought it may be beneficial to you to have your chapters re-edited. I'm on chapter 15 so far. Overall, I like your story and believe it has potential.
Hahaha, sorry for that. Right now I don't have much time for re-edit the chapters, it's a little hard doing, make the chapter to publish, and translate it. But more ahead I will try.
It's not that I ignore all you and your advices, I try to put these on work in the chapters that I write actually. So I think you should see becoming better the grammar in chapters ahead.