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Young, dumb, Junkie.

TheBurningBush · · Author · Sep 3, 2024

Hi, guys... I was looking at my rating review and thought about why I had 4.5 ratings. clear.png Just asking! 

If anyone hasn't rated Demonic Kitsune, and you love it, please do. Thanks

In Hell, we grow! clear.png

Crosscro · Oct 24, 2024

Late with a few critiques;

There is an abundance of en-dashes. Using symbols helps the text flow, but en- & em-dashes aren't common, using them excessively is jarring at first.

Descriptions are often very similar when similar situations appear. (When growing up, descriptions of her body's growth were almost identical each time skip. The demonic tree had a very similar description every appearance).

Despite that, it only took ~15 chapters to get used to it. There is no "right way to write"!

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