HappyVainGlory
· May 29, 2021
Specifically, in what way did you find it forced? Was it because it was nonsensical? Didn't fit the theme? Too sudden and unexpected? Or did the leadup to that point seem to not match for you?
Also, how was it unnecessary? Did you find it unnecessary because you felt like the story could have gone without it? And which part of it was unnecessary? The plot point itself, or the interactions as a result of the plot point?