* Star Wars = The Battle between Good vs Evil in Space.

(pt5 of 7)

And all "good story telling" has audiences interested in these central themes right away. Not down the line.

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Anyway, that's my ranting done. Hopefully something in there was helpful and elucidates my criticism more for you.

The problem îs, Beatrice herself doesn't yet know the reason, so thats why I can't write about it.

I said that comment about being translated from Chinese as a joke. I was mocking the poor quality of the English grammar as the story reads similar to a machine translation. (I only read the first 5-10 chapters because of this, it was too difficult for me to read as a native speaker)

If there truly is a Chinese version to be found, I would suggest you message the author's profile to ask them. 

Best of luck in your search.

There isn't and Chinese novel incliding genre yuri and r-18 is rare to none atleast i haven't read one