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Aersuy2 · Apr 29, 2023

Thank You for the fair review, also, She does have a reason to desire immortality, but it isnt yet explained in the novel, so thats that.

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alliterativearts · Apr 30, 2023

* Star Wars = The Battle between Good vs Evil in Space.

* MCU Captain America Movies = A man fighting to prove that Righteousness are timeless.
* Downton Abbey = The divisions of class are real, but the problems people face are universal.
* Family Guy = A wacky cast of cartoon characters stumbling through jokes about what's happening in the news lately...
* Witch Of Darkness = grimdark Harry Potter rip-off, erm, no, something about gaining Power, oh wait, achieving immortality!

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alliterativearts · Apr 30, 2023

And all "good story telling" has audiences interested in these central themes right away. Not down the line.

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alliterativearts · Apr 30, 2023

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Anyway, that's my ranting done. Hopefully something in there was helpful and elucidates my criticism more for you.

P.S. Please get a grammar/punctuation checker, you're driving me nuts with the commas, capitalization and missing apostrophes!!!
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Aersuy2 · Apr 30, 2023

The problem îs, Beatrice herself doesn't yet know the reason, so thats why I can't write about it.clear.png

Kamisamaisayurilover · Oct 12, 2022

can i ask u were the story the rabbit goddess as chinese version of it??????????????

alliterativearts · Oct 14, 2022

I said that comment about being translated from Chinese as a joke. I was mocking the poor quality of the English grammar as the story reads similar to a machine translation. (I only read the first 5-10 chapters because of this, it was too difficult for me to read as a native speaker)

If there truly is a Chinese version to be found, I would suggest you message the author's profile to ask them. 

Best of luck in your search.

Kamisamaisayurilover · Oct 14, 2022

There isn't and Chinese novel incliding genre yuri and r-18 is rare to none atleast i haven't read one 

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