Hi, for those wondering about where Soulless has gone, it's because I've taken it down to re-write it. It will come back soon and will have a steady release schedule of two chapters a day until it had catched up to where it was previously (unpublished chapters included). I hope to bring the best I can for my readers, so please bear with me as I polish some of the story's rougher edges.
Hey, I think another guy already said it, but sometimes your descriptions would have worked better if you had a third person narrator rather than always using first person, like, there are many times in recent chapters when Xavier talks about how “a cold glint went trough his eyes” or something like that, which...
...is weird because he has no way to constantly know about things like that, it’s really a question of details, this particular phrase could work better even in first person if you exchanged eyes/gaze/etc for his mind for example.
Hey there, I understand that while your current story cover is temporary, please either remove the cover or change to one that you actually have permission to use for the competition while you wait for your commissioned art.
Oh, my bad, I must've misunderstood it then. I just thought since after most of the covers used by the other stories did it like I just did and that they hadn't been taken down after more than two days, that it only required you to state the source.
I have uploaded a new cover and it will get changed as soon as Scribblehub's review is done.
For a month now I've tried out this schedule of posting five chapters a week; one on each weekday. And while it's been good to move so fast into the meat of the story, I've ultimately felt like they've been rushed and of lesser quality. As such, I will be changing the schedule to every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.
While this will mean fewer chapters, with more time at my disposal, I will instead increase both the length and quality of each chapter.