Hey, I think another guy already said it, but sometimes your descriptions would have worked better if you had a third person narrator rather than always using first person, like, there are many times in recent chapters when Xavier talks about how “a cold glint went trough his eyes” or something like that, which...
...is weird because he has no way to constantly know about things like that, it’s really a question of details, this particular phrase could work better even in first person if you exchanged eyes/gaze/etc for his mind for example.
Hey there, I understand that while your current story cover is temporary, please either remove the cover or change to one that you actually have permission to use for the competition while you wait for your commissioned art.
Oh, my bad, I must've misunderstood it then. I just thought since after most of the covers used by the other stories did it like I just did and that they hadn't been taken down after more than two days, that it only required you to state the source.
I have uploaded a new cover and it will get changed as soon as Scribblehub's review is done.
For a month now I've tried out this schedule of posting five chapters a week; one on each weekday. And while it's been good to move so fast into the meat of the story, I've ultimately felt like they've been rushed and of lesser quality. As such, I will be changing the schedule to every Monday, Wednesday, and Friday.
While this will mean fewer chapters, with more time at my disposal, I will instead increase both the length and quality of each chapter.
I've ended up falling sick and anything I write today simply does not work out, mostly due to me not being able to focus at all. Therefore no chapter today. There will either be a new chapter tomorrow or there will two chapters on Monday.
I'm also commissioning some new art, hopefully it will turn out good.
Just released two new chapters with the announcement of a schedule and the addition of increased advanced chapters on the Patreon!
Sorry for the long delay, I had wanted to get them out before the weekend but since one of my best friends was going off to Spain to live there for awhile, so I went out with the boys to party and ended up getting shit-faced drunk for practically the whole weekend...
Anyway... I'm back now! And with a schedule to boot!