I now have a Ko-Fi page.
I don't have anything to offer for your money though. Only made it to raise funds for more artwork commissions.
@WanderingSwordNuub speaks about how he wants harem members to be well-developed.
But I can just write a story where it's a VRMMO and it's literal NPCs who fell in love with him like Overlord. Literally in their programming.
Or I could go the slave route instead, with the MC using slave spells. That's valid if the story is about a villainous hero, which is a popular trope in the isekai genre, mind you.
Loshi pretty sure he used to live in modern society,Fiora can't color his views if his past life did
This is unrelated but, Will there be any graphical map of the world?, not detailed, just to see the world, so even a MS paint would do,
sure, if he was described as having a strong opinion in the first place... but he wasn't. therefor he's operating off the things he sees with his own eyes, and hears though others experiences. fiora most certainly colored his view of the matter, regardless of it being a lighter shade then fiora's pitch black dark.
It's nowhere near complete since I'm making it as the story goes along. If you still want to look at it, then I can PM it to you.
I wonder how popular Redo of A Healer would get. That's another edgy isekai fantasy, but this time, it's filled with sex and torture.
Already see comments saying how they're looking forward to the outrage from the SJWs.
Most western isekai fans don't even care about any OEL isekai, with the swathe of translated Japanese isekai out there.
Though I say that, but I saw someone recommending one of the more popular stories on the site just the other day...
If my novel were to be adapted to a visual medium, I can just imagine the scene where Marina explains stuff with Hugo is drawn in a comedic manner with Marina being the teacher with glasses and a pointing stick.
Watching Ore Dake Haireru makes me kinda want to start a new story with a less terrible MC.
I believe one thing that can explain that dissonance between cynical readers like me and them is suspension of disbelief. Once you accept something as fact or take it for granted that It would happen,you don't think too hard.
Once my suspension of disbelief crumbles even a little,I start looking at the framework more closely and then find more things wrong with it. The only explanation for those manga readers is that their suspension of disbelief is crazy strong combined with the novelty of not reading every isekai like me.
It is for the same reason people like chinese xianxia novels,it's novel and new;that makes it exciting but then when you look more closely it's the same tropes and cliches done over and over in a different flavor.(the last statement applies to the MC of Ore dake Haireru)Always the same execution of the tropes,never done meaningfully or has any emotional impact.
Damn, just noticed my one star rating is increasing. 😂
That's what you get for killing a milf, a loli, and their whole fucking family
and btw I'm not one of them, still have 5* on yours
Did he give feedback? One stars are like a 50/50 between trolls and people who read maybe 1-5 chapters and just came upon something they don't like and instantly rated it a one.
Goddamnit, almost all the novels here that I believe have good writing have higher reading level than mine. They're at 11th to 12th grade while I fluctuated between 9th to 10th and 7th to 8th grade.
And it's really hard to try to bump my story up to that level. I'm trying with the Fiora chapter I'm currently writing but it's not going well.
A high Reading level only means they are using more words than fewer people understand. Don't boss yourself too much with that, and if you're worried about using too simplistic words, look up synonyms.
I just realized I could just accept commissions to write stuff for people instead of begging for donations if I really want to commission images. That's a thing apparently.
You ever got a dream of your story getting bombarded by bad reviews? Because I just did.
We can't always see the sun and the clear blue skies, there are nights and storm clouds that darken the sky.
In a book I read a few months ago, in the book's Afterword his author compares the writing of a story to sailing on a sailboat (without GPS) in the ocean that leads to some unknown place
In the Afterword to this book, the author also wrote that sailing with the sun, a clear blue sky and the sea breeze is a very good thing, but there is the night or storm that hinders navigation.
He also wrote that when night comes you have to try and guide where you are seeing the stars. And when the sky starts to get dark because of the storm that may come, the browser has to choose between:
If I understand correctly:
Damn, Marina and Fiora head to head with Sherry really close behind.
Fiora & Sherry will have quit an interesting dynamic I think. Fiora is the confident one who won't be shy about her affections to Hugo and Sherry is the shy one who technically has first dibs on Hugo. Those two are likely going to clash quite a bit in the early stage of their relationship.
Oh damn, Re;Zero actually has an episode where Subaru goes back into his past (real life).
The last time I asked if people want to see Earth again relating to Hugo's original self, they all said no.
Well, want it or not, it's going to get brought up once
Just looking at the summary, I can already tell it's one big touching character development for Subaru.
You know, it might be interesting if I make
the quantum mechanic master, little sister of Hugo, ends up being a bad guy when she accidentally travels into this new world due to CERN fucking up or something.
Ends up starting the Fiora chapter too, because I want to write down all that worldbuilding stuff right away.
She's going to be the extra chapter at the end of the arc. Like Felicia's chapter at the end of the first arc.
Look forward to that, if you are Fiora fans. Dunno how many of you are around. I should make another poll.
how long ago was that poll? and what site was the polls taken from? i can't point and laugh if i don't have a target! lol
that said marina sure is popular.
It's from QuestionableQuesting.
That poll is still open even to this day. I started it waaay back months ago when I first posted on that site.
Yeah, she is. Probably the most popular character for now. Gotta poll it again though to see if people's opinions have changed or not. A lot of readers who get through the first arc where she's a prominent character have stopped reading altogether.
mmm, makes sense why the newer characters votes are abysmally low.
i mean i would think felicia would be more popular than nicole at least! lol
Writing about the new elf character, I'm just thinking on the
inevitable tragedy when the human male he likes passes away.
Doesn't help that the character design I stole for her is simply god tier.
I would've made her a waifu, if I hadn't gotten the plan to pair her off with another guy that is not Hugo. Heh, sorry Hugo, you ain't getting an elf waifu, it seems.
It's funny and nostalgic at the same time, reading old comments when I just first started my story. All the predictions and ideas people gave me, with most of them now not even reading the story anymore.
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