Damn, I actually got a good advice. Maybe putting Felicia so early in wasn't a good move since it's too much for the readers to accept Hugo being troubled by another big thing before he can make his peace with the Magocracy.
I originally planned to have the whole arc happen after he reunites with Sherry.
But then again, this tragedy won't happen if he's with her. Maybe he'll still have his PTSD but Sherry will be there to help him out.
On the other hand, it could mean he'll overcome that PTSD earlier since
he'll need to to face the opponent he has to win against to get to Sherry.
Got an advice to show promise of Hugo growing as a person. I'm not sure how to do more of that, without just making him unrealistically brave, ignoring all the trauma he has suffered.
Ha, it's not like I can just go change all I have written 100 chapters ago.
It's been six days since I last updated, huh? Still no real desire to write.
I want to commission a picture for Sherry, but the guy isn't responding to my PM.
good question, i would think to see the pacing the anime has as opposed to it's WN/LN, or manga format. videos tend to have a little extra to that medium that's often lost in the other formats.
however the bigger question is why not? the reasoning you've had previously is gone now. so why not waste some time on something enjoyable?
that's quite the assumption. is there a basis for it? like something you noticed in the previews? because so far i think it's quite well done. and i see little reason why the quality would drop seeing how far the LN has been published. unless there's budget issues. the VA's sound fine, the animation quality is good. the only concern i can think you might have is filler, but that again seems very unlikely due to where the LN is at.
*sigh* another one star review
pffft, most ironic part of the 1star reviews, they're all based on 'the novel isn't my taste'. which in non-edgy teen speak would mean anywhere from 2star to 4star reviews normally.
kids these days i swear. *insert get off my lawn meme here*
Well, it's enough to kill my desire to write. At least for this story, since I just updated a long abandoned fanfic of mine thanks to a comment popping up out of nowhere, telling me I should update.
That's a useful review as proof that people would really rather have the usual isekai MC over whatever Hugo is.
Kinda want to have a Bakarina-like character in the story. Or at the very least, just her appearance.
Finished OMORI. Wow, just, wow.
Totally won't affect my writing for Marina in the future. Nope.
I'm just glad I got to play it before I got spoiled.
I now have a Ko-Fi page.
I don't have anything to offer for your money though. Only made it to raise funds for more artwork commissions.
@WanderingSwordNuub speaks about how he wants harem members to be well-developed.
But I can just write a story where it's a VRMMO and it's literal NPCs who fell in love with him like Overlord. Literally in their programming.
Or I could go the slave route instead, with the MC using slave spells. That's valid if the story is about a villainous hero, which is a popular trope in the isekai genre, mind you.
Loshi pretty sure he used to live in modern society,Fiora can't color his views if his past life did
This is unrelated but, Will there be any graphical map of the world?, not detailed, just to see the world, so even a MS paint would do,
sure, if he was described as having a strong opinion in the first place... but he wasn't. therefor he's operating off the things he sees with his own eyes, and hears though others experiences. fiora most certainly colored his view of the matter, regardless of it being a lighter shade then fiora's pitch black dark.
It's nowhere near complete since I'm making it as the story goes along. If you still want to look at it, then I can PM it to you.
I wonder how popular Redo of A Healer would get. That's another edgy isekai fantasy, but this time, it's filled with sex and torture.
Already see comments saying how they're looking forward to the outrage from the SJWs.
Most western isekai fans don't even care about any OEL isekai, with the swathe of translated Japanese isekai out there.
Though I say that, but I saw someone recommending one of the more popular stories on the site just the other day...
If my novel were to be adapted to a visual medium, I can just imagine the scene where Marina explains stuff with Hugo is drawn in a comedic manner with Marina being the teacher with glasses and a pointing stick.
Watching Ore Dake Haireru makes me kinda want to start a new story with a less terrible MC.
I believe one thing that can explain that dissonance between cynical readers like me and them is suspension of disbelief. Once you accept something as fact or take it for granted that It would happen,you don't think too hard.
Once my suspension of disbelief crumbles even a little,I start looking at the framework more closely and then find more things wrong with it. The only explanation for those manga readers is that their suspension of disbelief is crazy strong combined with the novelty of not reading every isekai like me.
It is for the same reason people like chinese xianxia novels,it's novel and new;that makes it exciting but then when you look more closely it's the same tropes and cliches done over and over in a different flavor.(the last statement applies to the MC of Ore dake Haireru)Always the same execution of the tropes,never done meaningfully or has any emotional impact.
Damn, just noticed my one star rating is increasing. 😂
That's what you get for killing a milf, a loli, and their whole fucking family
and btw I'm not one of them, still have 5* on yours
Did he give feedback? One stars are like a 50/50 between trolls and people who read maybe 1-5 chapters and just came upon something they don't like and instantly rated it a one.
Goddamnit, almost all the novels here that I believe have good writing have higher reading level than mine. They're at 11th to 12th grade while I fluctuated between 9th to 10th and 7th to 8th grade.
And it's really hard to try to bump my story up to that level. I'm trying with the Fiora chapter I'm currently writing but it's not going well.
A high Reading level only means they are using more words than fewer people understand. Don't boss yourself too much with that, and if you're worried about using too simplistic words, look up synonyms.
I just realized I could just accept commissions to write stuff for people instead of begging for donations if I really want to commission images. That's a thing apparently.
You ever got a dream of your story getting bombarded by bad reviews? Because I just did.
We can't always see the sun and the clear blue skies, there are nights and storm clouds that darken the sky.
In a book I read a few months ago, in the book's Afterword his author compares the writing of a story to sailing on a sailboat (without GPS) in the ocean that leads to some unknown place
In the Afterword to this book, the author also wrote that sailing with the sun, a clear blue sky and the sea breeze is a very good thing, but there is the night or storm that hinders navigation.
He also wrote that when night comes you have to try and guide where you are seeing the stars. And when the sky starts to get dark because of the storm that may come, the browser has to choose between:
If I understand correctly:
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