Your stories were unexpected hits for me. When i read the bio and think this is mildly interesting, start reading it I think its amazing. Just to find it is written by you.
I don't like Cinnamon bun tho.
Is it because it has Cinnamon in the name?
Jokes aside, I'm glad you like my drabbles! It's a bit unfortunate that you don't like my biggest story, but that's alright, not everything is for everyone!
It might have had someting to do with it, i felt like it had been haunting me for months when searching for new stories to read before i gave it a chance.
Srsly tho fluf and stray cat are amazing stories. Stray cat is definitely up there in my favorite online stories ranking.
The limpet placed herself next to me, and pulled out the spell tome I’d left her that explained the use of Prestidigitation
author I found a plot hole in your novel "dead tired" mcs written language is completely different to the current language limpet shouldn't be able to read unless given similar translation glasses as the mc wears
Everything related to her learning Prestidigitation is a minor plot hole...
Or it's a magical magic book, or he casually translated it, or... some other magic related excuse.
Best way to explain it is that mc gave her a lesser enchantment of translation on her glasses that focuses solely on preselected languages
Just to said i have finish to read the 80 chapter of "Love Crafted", and the story rock ! It's one of the best i have read for a long time, even taking the "professionnal" one. In fact, you work was better than many so-called professionnal author.
You are realy good !
I particalary like the way you make us understand how differente is the way this tentacle horror think and see the world. And how well created, logical, and smooth is all the thing she do around that. Honneslty, almost all story using the trope of non-human, or human-become-monster are totaly wrecked because of that : they don't make us see a monster, and is differente way to think, live, do the thing ... but only humans doing thing, with a little touch of "another thing".
And, i was wondering if you have think to create an "after-story" or not at all ? Or some realy little POV from other people, down in the time, to see the progress of the life of our dear Abigail, but by the eyes of other. I think it can be a great idea. but well, the stroy like she is is already great !
(the character limit of 500 is a pain )
I'm working on the 'final' version. Basically, imagine if the online version is the rough draft and the next one is the 'perfected' version. I'm going to distribute it as an Ebook on Amazon and an audiobook on Audible.
Hmm...random question, a bit late too, but in "Cinnamon Bun" was Broccoli Bunch her name on Earth, or was she assigned it by the world?
It's her Earthly name!
Hello!
I'm not a frequent ScribbleHub user, but I thought it might be a nice place to share some of the stories I have posted on other sites like SpaceBattles and Royal Roads!
I hope you enjoy my dabbles into literature!
Welcome to Scribblehub!
Glad to see a fellow "quest" writer
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| Location: | Someplace Cold, Canada |
| Homepage: | http://RavensDagger |
| Series: | 14 |
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