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minimi22
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I write becaus I like to do so.
I read because I like to do so.
Apart from that I also like some games.

ragon · Jun 10, 2025

I read your review. Thank you for reading and leaving a comment. As an author, I think you'll understand that, on more than one occasion, we'd like to receive more feedback than we receive.

This is the first story of this length I've put together. The first part was a bit slow, but I think the lack of events is something I was able to make up for in the second part.
If you have the time, and especially the desire to continue reading, I would greatly appreciate your feedback.
minimi22 · Author · Jun 10, 2025

Proper feedback time then. There is something I like to call atention burnout for readers. This can happen for a bunch of reasons. The first and one that can't be easly adressed is content. If the reader doesn't like what they are reading their atention will be gone in an instant. You can't do much about this one as each author tells a story and some may not like it, this referes to the plot of the story. 

minimi22 · Author · Jun 10, 2025

Second and the one you suffer from is overatention to detail. I had no problem reading the first twenty chapters of your story. But your like to constantly call atention to things that A) have already been said. Or B) have little importance overall. By doing this you are having your readers forcefully engaging their attention on things that are not relevant for the overarching plot. My recomendation is to give your story a reread. 

minimi22 · Author · Jun 10, 2025

You will find a lot of instances were the MC (the ghost dude) repeats things he said on previous chapters. An example of this would be him constantly stating that Hinata is stronger than others believe. Show, don't tell. if you are going to tell, don't repeat. 

ragon · Jun 10, 2025

Thanks for responding. I think you're right. I was repetitive, but it couldn't have been obvious about the character's (Michel's) mental manipulations... it's more evident in chapters 36 to 41. I think I improved some of the aspects you mention as I wrote.

Luckily, for the second part of the story, I had a collaborator who read it before I started posting it online.

WafflyMirror · Jun 6, 2025

Ey, wher ma Self Made chapta at.clear.png

minimi22 · Author · Jun 6, 2025

On the 15th

WafflyMirror · Jun 6, 2025

cool

minimi22 · Author · May 30, 2025

Hello! So, I kind of want to read worm so I can write my own fanfic of it cause I have read a few and I find it to be a really interesting world. That being said, from what I understand worm is a grimdark world and I am kind of afraid. So would any of yall tell me from 1 to 40k how fuck that world is? Also, would any of you would be interested if I did write a worm fanfic?

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minimi22 · Author · May 30, 2025

So what I am gathering from this is that it has a great potential for a wish fulfilment fanfic. BUT reading it will make me want to puke blood... meh I was never one to make good decision. I'll read it.

Icarae · May 30, 2025

Hey there's a reason that fanon is the main preference, also theres the CYOA's which can give you ideas for AU's....and powers....and characters....and just about anything if you find the right CYOA really

Dream__forger · May 31, 2025

If you got the shakes from reading REND what happens when you read 40k stuff?

minimi22 · Author · May 31, 2025

That is my secret cap. I dont read  40k. Well i do read fanfiction. Not to mention 40k humans are a bit... extreme to say the least so its hard for me to sympathise with them.

Dream__forger · Feb 3, 2025

So now that the Naruto fanfic is completed do you think the Harry potter one will get more of a focus or will you start a new book?

minimi22 · Author · Feb 3, 2025

I am working on three projects rn. Only one is currently being publiclh published. The other two will be publicly published sometime in the future

minimi22 · Author · Jan 13, 2025

Hi

Frowfy · Aug 11, 2024

Thanks for the follow. I curiously saw your profile and found two well-known stories. I thought "Wow, a big guy like that liked what I wrote?". I don't know if you'll read it, but thank you anywayclear.png.

minimi22 · Author · Aug 11, 2024

Yup liked em a lot. Specialy so cause they are writen from fandoms very rarely seen here clear.png

okashihime · Jun 22, 2024

Hey, thanks for the warning. <3clear.pngclear.png

Spoiler

I did panic delete the chapter, but it was the correct text, I just used the wrong chapter number, lol.

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Solarmissles · Mar 19, 2024

Chapters pls. Cookieclear.png?

Saekokaburagi · Feb 26, 2024

Well helloooo~ 

minimi22 · Author · Feb 11, 2024

Have you ever read a project you abandoned or one you are working on and go "Huh, want to read more" only to realize you are the author and you are the one that has to write it? Cuase it just happened to me and I am clear.png

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minimi22 · Author · Aug 12, 2024

salad? homer simpson is standing in the grass with the words fuck this shit i 'm out

Frowfy · Aug 12, 2024

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Liber8T · Aug 12, 2024

Shit! It was super ineffective!clear.png

Liber8T · Aug 12, 2024

Hey get back here! Someone's gotta eat this dry salad!clear.png

Aman2001 · Feb 3, 2024

Hey I just saw someone posting your story "other world chimera" on webnovel 

It is posted by someone named "SlimeQueen127"

Thought i should inform you

minimi22 · Author · Nov 30, 2023

Sorry no chapter tomorrow. My aunt passed away so... yeah. See yall next week I guess

Johnwolfie435 · Dec 1, 2023

Life sucks ass sometimes. Take all the time you need.

Liber8T · Dec 1, 2023

My condolences 

God_of_Darkness · Sep 30, 2023

You forget to upload in fantranslation. Com? 

minimi22 · Author · Sep 30, 2023

I decided to have it be in sync with scribble from now on. clear.png

Xuan-Wu · Aug 23, 2023

Thanks. 

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