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Cytotoxin
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Comments: 4216
Blue_Jay · Jan 25, 2024

"Ikebana Magic Meets the Shoggoth" books 1 - 6 are all on kindle, published by "Bryan Madison" - and the singular written review for book one is that it's shit because exposition and fight scenes are clearly chopped and the conversations in foreign languages don't have any translations anywhere. And the description is your synopsis with a few synonyms thrown around. So yeah, hope you can get that fixed.

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Clayton4956 · Feb 1, 2024

Also, about the review, well...

Your novel is meant to be read here on scribblehub and not anywhere else. If it was meant for the whole public on amazon, obviously things would be different.

Things would be edited to fit a book, and not a long continuous story chapters after chapters. The synopsis would be more detailed about what's happening in the story and there would be some content warning.

Clayton4956 · Feb 1, 2024

There are no tags that you can put to warn the readers of the content on amazon (as i saw briefly) while here on scribblehub, you can easily kind of guess what you're going to read by just reading the tags.

Clayton4956 · Feb 1, 2024

Your story is really good, and the writing style fits what readers on this site like to read, and it is presented in a way that people not liking some things can just go read somethings else and waste time on something they don't like. Obiously it won't fit on amazon for randos who pay to read high quality and structured stuff.

Clayton4956 · Feb 1, 2024

I hope you don't feel discouraged because a guy just read something he shouldn't have been able to in the first place (it shouln't be on amazon as it is), and wouldn't have read it anyway if he saw it here first.

(I'm not saying your novel is bad, it is actually good and i wait every day for an update, i just found out today you updated it and my mouse made a beeline for the chapter.)

Naischtir · Jan 24, 2024

I hope the problem with amazon did go as you hoped.

are you writing other novels too? or are you on hiatus/holiday from writing?

im checking dayly if there is new updates^^

Cytotoxin · Author · Jan 24, 2024

No other novels. And no, I`m just having trouble with this chapter. Soon, hopefully.

Naischtir · Jan 24, 2024

ah okay^^ well i hope too that your trouble will be overcome =D i greatly enjoy this story.

Wish you a good time

Millinsjoshya · Jan 9, 2024

Don't know if this is you mate but I spotted it by chance on Amazon, so if it isn't well thought I'd send a heads-up. Using unlimited from what I can tell this is certainly your book. 

 https://www.amazon.ca/dp/B0CJCH5CYT/?coliid=I2NC1OHGTV8Z4E&colid=K8JUU5CFOPQU&psc=0&ref_=list_c_wl_lv_ov_lig_dp_it

Thurisaz · Jan 10, 2024

WHAT THE &^%*^ 

I HOPE THIS IS YOU CYTOTOXIN!!!
if this is you please tell us as i for one will definitely buy your book if its on kindle. 

Cytotoxin · Author · Jan 11, 2024

Dammit, not again. No, I did NOT put anything on the Amazon. Gonna have to write yet another complaint...

Ok, WTF. Amazon is being extra... incompetent, apparently.

I have already complained about this thing. They pulled "Book 1" and left Books 2 to 6 where they are. WTF.

Millinsjoshya · Jan 11, 2024

Glad to be of small service

dolphinm · Jan 14, 2024

2 - 6  reported for copyright breaches at amazon.co.uk

They are worth publishing tho .....

Miles

Nicolae · Jan 8, 2024

hope Christmas was good.

Lilith_Zenon · Dec 21, 2023

Hope you've been doing okay~. clear.pngclear.png

Cytotoxin · Author · Dec 21, 2023

Passably. Just trying to... comb out the whole Kraina experience. It`s current plan is like a plate of spaghetti.

Lilith_Zenon · Dec 21, 2023

Ooff. Well, I wish you great luck in that then~!

I've said it before, but I want to say it again; I really love your story! Thank you again for sharing it with us. Truly~.♥

Kimeres · Oct 2, 2023

Good to see you writing again i hope life has been treating you well clear.png

linguini · Oct 2, 2023

Would love a way to throw money at you, just saying clear.png

Cytotoxin · Author · Oct 2, 2023

I`ll look into it.

Cytotoxin · Author · Oct 1, 2023

It looks like goose-themed acid trip.

xXxShutoxXx · Sep 26, 2023

R u dead??? Let me know if you are.  just read almost all the chapter 

Cytotoxin · Author · Sep 26, 2023

...Working on it. Life`s been kinda busy lately.

grumpgoose · Sep 12, 2023

Popping by to say I enjoy your work and look forward to the next update! clear.png

Cytotoxin · Author · Sep 12, 2023

I`ll try to post something soonish.

Clayton4956 · Aug 30, 2023

Hey,

I was wondering, will we ever have illustrations for the characters? And different versions of Alyssa(human and shoggoth form)?

I think it would be helpful in visualising the story.

Cytotoxin · Author · Aug 30, 2023

Not planning on it.

Especially not planning on trying to depict anything definitive about eldritch biologies. Sounds very... unwise.

Clayton4956 · Aug 30, 2023

Maybe… yeah, maybe it would be.

Eirenliel · Oct 2, 2023

I tried to do something with my lack of skill 3 years ago, it was in one of the chapters. It was supposed to be Alyssa raiding the sultanate https://f.eiren.io/0c/54/d3f55ef544f17008489f46cf1ae3/Alyssa_1_2020-07-28_2.png

Clayton4956 · Aug 6, 2023

Hi! I thought maybe you wouldn’t find my question in the comments so I’m doing it here.

In chapter 59 (with the first flight of the airship), Alyssa explains how the airship works and says some parts works with flowers.

But, and I might not remember well, I though that Alyssa doesn’t need to use flowers to do magic, because humans just limited themselves with them and in reality you don’t need them to do magic.

Clayton4956 · Aug 6, 2023

Is there something I’m missing here? Because if you don’t really need flowers to do magic, why use them for a magic airship?

Cytotoxin · Author · Aug 6, 2023

She doesn`t, but the rest of people still believe it is a necessity.

Remember, it`s not just her personal yacht, it`s also an advertisement for zeppelins she is intending to sell later. Champagne royals already mean to buy, and they would expect flowers to be present.

Clayton4956 · Aug 6, 2023

Thanks for the clarification!

SireYack · Jul 23, 2023

Are you french  ?clear.png 

Cytotoxin · Author · Jul 23, 2023

No. I was born in USSR, actually.

SireYack · Jul 23, 2023

Oh ok lol, i got it totaly wrong

Vorquel · Jun 14, 2023

Have you considered making a patreon for this story? I'd def pay to see this story updated more regularly again.

Cytotoxin · Author · Jun 15, 2023

Working on it.

Vorquel · Jun 15, 2023

I look forward to what you come up with.

linguini · Aug 31, 2023

Seconding the request for a way to throw money at you for this phenomenal story <3

ScottyToddy · Jun 10, 2023

Are there going to be more frequent updates in the future? I really love the story and want to read mooooore

Cytotoxin · Author · Jun 11, 2023

Hell if I know. I`ll try.

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