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"I'm a lunatic, get it right."
"Those that strive for Lunacy are the most desperate for change."
"Why should we fear death, when it's the regrets of our lives that we should fear and handle?"
Note to self, stop changing from past tense to present tense when writing, stick to one unless I have a real good reason. Find some reference material to learn proper action scenes in literature. Find a better way for conversations between people that I am comfortable with. Actually proofread my work before publishing it, so I don't beat myself up so much with how many errors I saw.... haaa it's my first published work, and it's a decent start, but I really let my own self down...
Idk, tense switching, and even narrative switching (first/third) can be used pretty well if you ‘make it flow’ (in my case, just following my gut led to a mix that I thought felt nice, but prob not for everyone). I skimmed this, and it really helped me, but if you’re a note taker, I’d imagine you’d also love it. https://owl.purdue.edu/owl/general_writing/grammar/verb_tenses/verb_tense_consistency.html
So I’m a Spider, So What? is a good example of flimsy narration/tense (I think?) done pretty well, and, spoilers if you read it;
It has some interesting sci/fi science fantasy elements later in the series, but still a fantastical tone.
Thanks for the tips, I'll be using them whenever I get my replacement laptop, cause my previous one.... currently doesn't have a screen, nor hdmi, nor a battery... hard drive's still good, so once I get the replacement in an unknown amount of time, this will be helpful
I wish you luck!
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"I'm a lunatic, get it right."
"Those that strive for Lunacy are the most desperate for change."
"Why should we fear death, when it's the regrets of our lives that we should fear and handle?"
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