The end of chapter 17 was amazing. It's really awesome that Allara finally got her magic, but it's really, really sad that it took the girl that she likes almost getting raped to get it.
That probably will only work to annoy new readers. If you do want to leave the previous versions, please do so in another version labelled (Old) or put it inside a spoiler in the author's note of the chapter.
I have not forgotten wolf with silver wings. I have been having a writing crisis with it as I am coming towards the end of arch 2. I will be working on the next chapter after work.