Nah its fine. The rewrite became extensive enough that I'm gonna create second novel for it anyways. It is also a good review, and while I disagree with some parts (the snake family one), many are things I agree with (the past skills, the past itself, though it has a reason which was supposed to be revealed at the end of the arc).
Also- if I say in chapter I want critique, and then ask for people to remove it when its good, what kind of person would that make me?
(I replied in wrong post, sry)