It's fine. It did a good job of catching my interest in your story anyways.  But the mecha nerd in me just couldn't not point it out either. I had to say it. It would have lingered in my mind for days otherwise.

Also I've put your story in my "waiting to grow" list on the site. I'm looking forward till you have enough chapters that I'm willing to start reading it. (I've been burned too many times by interesting stories that only post a few chapters then fade away.)