So this new website sucks for getting all the way to the latest chapter. they don't even have a chapter list to jump to a chapter, you have to hit next 60+ times. Also the app does not seem to work on my old tablet. If the story will be free there is there any reason to take it down from here?
If now it costs coins, it means they are betting on my story. That's good to know. I created the slang terms not to bend the rules or whatever, but because I think slang will change in 1450 years from now. Remember, this story is in the future, way after the Great sage.
Ok I had not thought of linguistic drift being the reasoning you would have for that. You almost need more of it to make it feel more solid and you may want to make a more direct note of it at the beginning of the book.
I great book that did linguistic drift is "off Armageddons reef" by David Webber.
I followed the idea on the Farscape series, they also used different words for slang and insults, and they didn't explained in the begining of the show. With the episodes, I got used to hearing "frelt" being used left and right.
... Lately i can't help but feel your series don't have a unique feel to itself... I get this fake feeling when i read it. As in : when i read it i don't feel like the characters are alive.
I quite stumped as i don't have any advice to how to solve this. Or don't know if i am the only one that have the same oppinion.
I am not sure if it's you or not. That the wind crystal was not green color in the series. The template of wind magic is green normally... (Just try to ignore the purple color of the game Golden Sun (trying to reference an awesome rpg gba game))
It's just that i remember that i read a while recently a story where the magic crystal containing wind magic was blue or something (not green) and i found it strange that it got that color that was totally different then the template/cliche.
Hmmm maybe it's the story Pheonix rising...
Hi ! I'm back again ! I binge readed the chapters i missed. I commented about 2-3 typos.
Btw right now i just got a crazy idea because i wanted to ask you if Myra will find a boyfriend or not. How about her with the daughter baron that started training heal ? Not sure what is your oppinion on yuri/GL but see that appear would be quite nice (mainly for me ! NYAHAHA !). That because i got no idea who else she could get with as there are no more young boys introduced.
I thought from the beginning of this story that one girl will be a little more to the side than the others. I just didn't know at that moment, who. But while the story was growing, I thought Myra was the obvious choice. There's a small hint on a chapter when Arys asks her if she prefers a girlfriend, and she panicked.
Your question because of Myra, gave me a flash of inspiration. Seya had a previous love problem, before meeting Ryn. And that problem, will return soon. The love problem will appear in a side story, about the BeastKind. I think some readers will hate, others will like. I thought it was appropriate. And funny...