... Lately i can't help but feel your series don't have a unique feel to itself... I get this fake feeling when i read it. As in : when i read it i don't feel like the characters are alive.
I quite stumped as i don't have any advice to how to solve this. Or don't know if i am the only one that have the same oppinion.
I am not sure if it's you or not. That the wind crystal was not green color in the series. The template of wind magic is green normally... (Just try to ignore the purple color of the game Golden Sun (trying to reference an awesome rpg gba game))
It's just that i remember that i read a while recently a story where the magic crystal containing wind magic was blue or something (not green) and i found it strange that it got that color that was totally different then the template/cliche.
Hmmm maybe it's the story Pheonix rising...
Hi ! I'm back again ! I binge readed the chapters i missed. I commented about 2-3 typos.
Btw right now i just got a crazy idea because i wanted to ask you if Myra will find a boyfriend or not. How about her with the daughter baron that started training heal ? Not sure what is your oppinion on yuri/GL but see that appear would be quite nice (mainly for me ! NYAHAHA !). That because i got no idea who else she could get with as there are no more young boys introduced.
I thought from the beginning of this story that one girl will be a little more to the side than the others. I just didn't know at that moment, who. But while the story was growing, I thought Myra was the obvious choice. There's a small hint on a chapter when Arys asks her if she prefers a girlfriend, and she panicked.
Your question because of Myra, gave me a flash of inspiration. Seya had a previous love problem, before meeting Ryn. And that problem, will return soon. The love problem will appear in a side story, about the BeastKind. I think some readers will hate, others will like. I thought it was appropriate. And funny...
Because i am in a decent state i will share with you a song that i really like that seems to come from a VN/eroge:
Big link because it's not youtube but a website that allow selecting what part to loop listen and it's already programmed to what i want you to listen to.
Edit: lol somehow the link became shorter after posting.
I remembered some stuffs. Not sure you corrected them when you posted on Scribble.
1) Unless i'm crazy you wrote at the beginning that MC and his parents nod their heads to show he shouldn't use magic or something.
Shouldn't it shaking their heads right and left for no?
2) Wasn't there a dragonoid that was imprisoned in MC's dimension storage ? It would be nice that you had a part of the chapter for him being released or just a sentence at the end saying he didn't forget to release him.
To me it kinda looked that MC is still keeping in his dimension storage.
I think I've corrected the nod and shake mess. That Dragonoid was on the side story, "Seya – Maybe it's safer for me if I let him there a while, right?".
Eventually, he was free. But he hold a bad grudge. He appear again some chapters ahead, for revenge.
I've corrected the typos, thanks for pointing them.
On the side story "Enter the Dragonoid" is where Seya imprisioned one dragonoid.
Some chapters ahead, he will appear again. And also Titania, the queen of fairies, in the same report but it's way ahead.
First there's "the institute" arc, the "back to school" arc and in the "visiting the domain" arc, he will appear. I'm starting to think that this story is getting too long! Maybe it's time to kill Seya! :)
No, only the bag and the belt purse will have that feature. I thought the same, acctualy, so I tried to minimize the damage. There is also that feature on the dark Crystals on the Magic Border, but Dark Magic needs to be spent. Those pesty Demonoids are always creating a lot.
Normally i should have commented on your series but sadly i read it on RR and i don't want to write comments on their website. And somehow too tired to re-check the chapters on scribble just to comment.
Well, I'm also a little tired of RR coments. Only a few in there actually help with some pointers or ideas. There's a lot of nasty ones. Well, I guess I can't please everyone. I also have this story on webnovel. I'm also writing more slowly, two more stories. One of these days I will start the upload of them.