Honestly, this story is just a prototype to improve my writing before I get into some of my other projects, but I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far. Do you have any complaints or things you think I should improve on for the story, or just my writing in general?
No not really my main issue with story on this site is chapter length ur our great and grammer is not bad as far I can tell anything u that need explaining u get to it so no complaints looking forward to the mc meet their brothers and sisters