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Gahar80 · Sep 22, 2021

I will surely try you other novels so i may change my mind after that.  I hope that my words don't sound to arrogant for you who are actually putting  afford into writing novels. I'm still reading this one as well.  

Gahar80 · Sep 22, 2021

I'm now on chapter 42 and shortly after yet another situation when MC was both  put into trouble and  rescued from it by the same person who summoned him to this world in the first place. At this point of time the only fillings i my have for MC is a pity and the whole situation fills more like a cruel behavioral experiment orchestrated by a bored mage  then anything else.

Gahar80 · Sep 22, 2021

Why should MC even try to fulfill his role if the one who requested it is his kidnapper? Because of an isekai version of a Stockholm syndrome? Why  even try to do anything if almost everyone around is many times more powerful then MC?

Gahar80 · Sep 22, 2021

Thank you for your reply. As i wrote  before i don't think that your novel is a bad one.  Just in my opinion it relay to much on side characters who take so much place that MCs own affords began to fills completely meaningless.  

C_P_Tuck · Sep 21, 2021

Thank you for your review of my story! I'm sorry that it didn't quite live up to your expectations, and I hope you can find a work that is more in line with your tastes.

The introduction of the one other character I've previously written about was a deliberate choice. Did I use him a bit too much? Perhaps. But I felt it necessary, as he is the strongest mage available, and in a unique position to summon the MC to the world. There really wasn't anyone better I could think of.

C_P_Tuck · Sep 21, 2021

Regardless, I really appreciate you taking the time to submit a review. Every feedback, good or bad, helps me grow as an author. I do hope you'll give one of my other stories a chance, however, as I was able to put much more time, thought, and effort into them. If you're up for it, I recommend Tome of the Body. If you like that, Tome of the Soul :) I'll be working on the third book of that trilogy before too long.

(sorry, got a bit wordy, so I had to split it up clear.png)

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