Regardless, I really appreciate you taking the time to submit a review. Every feedback, good or bad, helps me grow as an author. I do hope you'll give one of my other stories a chance, however, as I was able to put much more time, thought, and effort into them. If you're up for it, I recommend Tome of the Body. If you like that, Tome of the Soul :) I'll be working on the third book of that trilogy before too long.
(sorry, got a bit wordy, so I had to split it up )