Mirai was a tricky character. Because he never considered himself male or female... just a wife. I feel that his character is so tragic that people overlook previous bias of gender roles in relationships and honestly just feel he/she deserves to be happy. I'm actually proud of how Mirai came out, it was much better than my original concept
Hey BLuU here, just wanted to say thank you for the review. Sorry about the time skips but I felt it was the only way I could fit 4 1/2 months into arc 2 since arc one was 8 days.
Thank you for reading, and especially thank you for the honest review. I might switch back to the regular format for arc 3
I love to see an author take constructive criticism so well. Although I hope you don't feel pressured to change which writing style suits you best off of my biased opinion. Different readers have different preferences; mine being that I hate having to reread and slow down vastly because I find myself confused in some instances. The biggest praise I have for you is making the relationship between Mirai and Haruto enjoyable even though I don't really like male to trap relationships.