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ForIAMRebORn · Jan 12, 2022

Thanks bro for the review! Much appreciated!  

Goraak · Jan 13, 2022

No problem bro, love the story. Keep it up!

BLuU · Jun 17, 2021

Mirai was a tricky character. Because he never considered himself male or female... just a wife. I feel that his character is so tragic that people overlook previous bias of gender roles in relationships and honestly just feel he/she deserves to be happy. I'm actually proud of how Mirai came out, it was much better than my original concept

BLuU · Jun 17, 2021

Hey BLuU here, just wanted to say thank you for the review. Sorry about the time skips but I felt it was the only way I could fit 4 1/2 months into arc 2 since arc one was 8 days.

Thank you for reading, and especially thank you for the honest review. I might switch back to the regular format for arc 3

Goraak · Jun 17, 2021

I love to see an author take constructive criticism so well. Although I hope you don't feel pressured to change which writing style suits you best off of my biased opinion. Different readers have different preferences; mine being that I hate having to reread and slow down vastly because I find myself confused in some instances. The biggest praise I have for you is making the relationship between Mirai and Haruto enjoyable even though I don't really like male to trap relationships.

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