Thanks. I hope things go well for you too!

Thanks. Though depression can be a cruel taskmistress. 

Tell me about it...though I think we both have different situations.

Technically no two people are the same. Throw them through the exact same circumstances and they will act and react differently. Maybe similar but probably not the same. 

Awesome! Just got to the second prologue chapter myself. Good luck with writing!

Glad to have made your day better!

Your welcome! Istas has been quite adorable so far and When I Found Myself seems a bit rushed and telling the timescale is kind of difficult. Would be easily converted to multiple chapters with extrapolation. But, it is your story and you wrote it how you wanted it to be, and it turned out well. 

i mean to return to when I found myself some time, but I'm focusing on Istas for now. I've written about a third of the story so far but need to edit all those chapter to publish them but after I hope to fix everything I can on when I found myself.

Editing takes time, don't worry about it. Just go at your pace and keep up your health and everything will work out. 

Well the swear words are alright. From what I have been able to tell they are used in the right context. Though the story seems to be a bit on the rushed side I would guess it will slow down when you get to the main content you are going for. Congratulations on this being your first story! It is going well so far. 

ah yes, I'm currently writing 3rd arc where Lily meets the beastkin, and yes, the story has slowed down a bit and I'm delving deeper into her powers.

Although it's not going that well, but I'll manage.

Everyone has to start from somewhere. You will do just fine. Good luck and hope your story goes how you want it to!

Well for now it does, thanks.

Your welcome! Glad to help out!

Your welcome! Just don't go too far away and I can keep up! Lol.

Lmao... I don't walk fast myself, should be fine! 

No problem for the follow. As for your story, I am hoping to see how it goes as it is another interesting story. 

Everyone has a private life. And sometimes life gets in the way. Your life is more important then your works. So keep doing you and we can always see what happens from there. 

They have been quite interesting so far. 

Always up for interesting stories. 

Yep! Though I would say that you might want to work on pronouns for just about everything. Many references of one character switching between he/she, I think even "it" is there also. Soemtimes even in the same sentence. If you would like help let me know and I will see what I can do. 

I am sorry that the story has so many problems with the pronouns, although I try to make the sentences on my own, I also use a translator quite often to write complicated parts that I don't know what is the correct way to write certain sentences.I am aware that there are also quite a few errors.

I appreciate your gesture of help, just leave me a comment about the errors you notice in the chapter is enough for me, only if you want. Anyway, I will try to pay much more attention from now on.

It is all a learning experience. Takes time and effort. And it isn't that bad, saying as I have read worse before. 

Yep! You have a good story going so far. Thanks for writing!

It has been an interesting read so far. Thanks for writing!

The stories you have have been interesting so far. Still working on the last one if I remember right. 

All 3 are now complete :) I'm glad that you find them interesting :)

Well congrats on completing them. That is a feat that many fall behind on for multiple different reasons. 

Thank you :) not sure where I go from here but I'll figure it out eventually haha :)