Glad to do so. Though I have to say the Emver story is turning out differently than it seemed to be at the start. But so far an interesting story and waiting to see where it goes.
Technically no two people are the same. Throw them through the exact same circumstances and they will act and react differently. Maybe similar but probably not the same.
Thanks for the Follow Irlina! I hope to get some good chapters out! The Prologue is a work in progress of course, and it is unfortunately a long one. But you guys will see it here soon!
Your welcome! Istas has been quite adorable so far and When I Found Myself seems a bit rushed and telling the timescale is kind of difficult. Would be easily converted to multiple chapters with extrapolation. But, it is your story and you wrote it how you wanted it to be, and it turned out well.
i mean to return to when I found myself some time, but I'm focusing on Istas for now. I've written about a third of the story so far but need to edit all those chapter to publish them but after I hope to fix everything I can on when I found myself.
Well the swear words are alright. From what I have been able to tell they are used in the right context. Though the story seems to be a bit on the rushed side I would guess it will slow down when you get to the main content you are going for. Congratulations on this being your first story! It is going well so far.
Everyone has a private life. And sometimes life gets in the way. Your life is more important then your works. So keep doing you and we can always see what happens from there.