Thank you so much. Your feedback means a lot to me.

I'm not that confident with my English and vocabulary. If you spotted an error in any of it or awkwardness in the story, please tell me.

I will gladly do it but really your story is great but I would like it if there's somethingmting illogical like him retaining his personality and grudges even tho he lost his memories which is basically impossible if that where to happen in real life cus if someone irl lost his/her memory they will not remember those things and will not retain they're personality 

Sorry for the rant

Actually, the protagonist's mind had been altered to slightly adjust to that world. A small hint to that was the differences between the race and the existence of something similar to our modern electricity (The light switch on his room was the proof of it).

Although he will eventually remember his past (This is a spoiler, I think).

And just to add to it, the Scumbag wanted the protagonist to enjoy the otherworld experience first.