He's alive!?!

   I have to say, great job on the story of ashner and his group. Ashner isn't op and not massively passive or dumb. He has his head on his shoulders even though his spirit is broken. Cant wait to see how it progresses. 

I think you have a good story going here with the maxed stats one. A very flawed main character who’s fallen from grace but gets a second chance. Ashner is an interesting one I hope you keep writing. 

I'm going to try posting another story, while I work on this one. It's a different type of atmosphere all together but some of you might enjoy it. So as always, thank you for reading. And I hope I can live up to your expectations.