might as well consider it a full rewrite from chapter 3 onwards. I decided to shift the pacing and add a hell of a lot more fluff so like MC has a reason to like each of the women of his eventual harem enough to go through stupid bullshit. Shizu is still a slut, and Kanae's still doing her brocon grooming, just on the down low.
Yes. Less emotional stupidity, better and more relevant character development. Kouta will learn how to read the mood better and not be a complete disappointment at every turn.
That's good because emotionally he was a scumbag and didn't support Nakada when she was alone in a conflict he acted like Sarota from sakuroso no pet when he had an inferiority complex he took it out on Shina. Because of this I wanted to abandon the story but I read for the twins I hope like in the previous version the wife will become her sister. It was only after her best realized him that he started treating her better.
mmm I'm a reader who has a love hate relationship with your novels lately more hate than love, but that's something apart you're fine? I just want to know if you're alive?
I'm alive. I've been doing some edits to Black Label, actually. Trying to expand the intro to be a bit less intense, and instead have some fluffy moments to develop Kouta x Shizu better, as well as bring in Ruru earlier, changing some things around.