FYI, hopefully no offense, but I'm going to read on the other site where you've published more of the story. I've also messaged a bunch of dudes, who I know also read similar fiction to my tastes, and who are also power-readers who comment a lot and have followers (at least some of them do) who keep track of what fiction these guys are digging up. Hopefully we can get you trending and, later, sell some books. Good luck!