Hey love Internet Cafe in Another World and I see you are posting a rework if your still need some help my opinion is to simplify either the normal or the fantasy side cause right now while it's good it feels like you are trying to tell two stories at the same time. If don't want to simplify then make them intertwined you said the mc's daughter are playing with other kids why not have them play with CJ and the others
I don't know. I'm just brainstorming ideas and i'm just thinking of either rewriting it again or scrap the idea. Mainly because i was lost in the direction its going for.
Yeah. Its mainly the reason why I'm brainstorming. I feel like I have a sudden idea of writing a fanfic based on an internet in another world but its either I might get lost when I write an original story or I have a hard time If I try writing with a fanfic setting.
If your wondering why I haven't updated much. Its mainly because in the past week, I had to my internet cut off by a storm that had pass by. There's also a guy I'm been annoyed with which I was so tired of entertaining him that I basically pass out before I could write. Much less even read a novel in the past few days.
I would like to write more but not only has he physically drained me, he also tired me out mentally that I'm basically brain dead by the time I have free time. Much less him just annoying me everyday for 24 hours straight.
Thank you mysterious stranger! You not only took my virginity but also give me a big one as well! Yay. I don't have to work on illegal business anymore!