but he made the things he changed to have a foundation of things from movies and games, like Jarvis for example instead of him bringing an AI from games or movies. I'm going to stop here, I am still trying to refind the novel, wherever he is I will find him, and the thing about Caliburn, have you seen the car in-game? almost all the vehicles from in-game do not have a windshield and you can't see through the vehicle from the outside cause it is made of metal.
but you can see out from the inside cause of nanite sensors, if you bring Caliburn from the game, it will not be street legal, and not only that but it will put you in the spotlight, cause people are going to take pictures and post it in social media.
I think i forgot to mention as Jarvis had already registered the car and it had become street legal. But yes I can understand there are loopholes and for that reason he brought out cayenne to his travel. That cakiburn car was a momentary thing. No, I wanted to know the views of public of this novel. I want to make it better because this is kind of like my dream project.
And about sigret. She isn't any love interest if that is what u are thinking
Did you even read the first part of the review, I said I have followed your work for a little while now, and I have read every chapter since chapter 1, did I leave any review or comments before the latest chapter? I'm here for every update to read the story, I'm not here to sugarcoat my words to say all your work is great, some chapters are good and some are not, I wouldn't leave a review without reading it entirely.
There are a lot of things I could have said more but i left a lot of gap so to not spoil it for people who is interested in reading, learn to take criticism and know that not everyone will say nice things about it.
Understand what forced or what's not, "speaking of assassins" do you understand what I'm saying? didn't you plays videos games to know there are assassin classes in general, it doesn't even have to be an Android.
Did I ask you for accelerate story progression? no, I understand he is already OP with what he has, what I've reviewed were things that he has done or could have, I never said he should get everything as well, you need to understand that readers have different point of view then the author right? I would expect you to know that judging you wrote Multiverse of Marvel.
What is Dignity? you know how you sent me a message about the review and you start judging me? that is dignity and self-respect, be it false, never the less it is still dignity that you have to message me to defend yourself, and start judging me instead.
And "Lol seems like you want to dominate everything." and here you are expecting everyone to like your novel without any criticism, Within my review, I never stated that he should dominate everything he sees, and you seem to be confused between Dignity and domination.
You seem to be confused, cool your head and read it calmly, first of all, sorry about the stars as I'm was writing from a phone, mistake on my part and it is fixed.
Now, you think that just because I reviewed your work and called out things that is plot holes and forced, and could be improved, you start judging me and by saying "You all expect everything from the get go."
Question ,how far are you taking this ,cause I'm not gonna lie you kinda hyped me up with the conversation of those two ridiculous beings that stand at the top of two of my favorite verses ,so is it going omniversal ,cs thats what that Convo had me thinking