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I don't care what people think about me. But dogs, I desperately want dogs to like me.
Three days with only phone for webs. I guess I should count my blessings. others had power out
Hold strong!
Bleh storm knocked out the Internet.
Sad Bleh
I'm just saying I love the story so far (charpter 51). I'm a little afraid to comment since I can't delete comments but I just want to say I'm trangender myself and I don't think the story offended me in any way like some other trans in the comments. (voted to keep the trans tag)
Magical Girl? I’m not sure about this.
is heavily inspired by adult game is it an 18+ novel?
magical camp was such a good game sadly it was drop I haven't play the other 2
Congrats on being on Trending again!
Neat! I missed it the first time.
Edited chapter 11 shaved off ~100 words, hopefully easier to read now.
Ever get to a turning point in your story and sorta struggle with where to go next?
I'm not a writer, so I don't know, but you got a lot of things you could develop in the story still I think.
Edited chapter 10. It should hopefully be less of a mess and is 200 words shorter.
Updated chapter 8 and 9 for magical girl, trimmed about 500 words for chapter 9.
Editing is done up to chapter 7 for magical girl. I could prob make it a bit better but mostly wanting to condense some stuff and get a consistent tense.
I got chapters 3 and 4 of magical girl edited. At least the first few should all be free of that cringe present tense.
I got chapter 1 and 2 of magical girl edited a bit. Hopefully they don't suck as much now. Chapter 2 was 6700 words now it is 6000 hopefully that is better.
When you pluck away a little bit here and there but still don't have a whole chapter done.
You ever read your own stuff and think 'this is so bad I can't believe I didn't notice how bad it was when I posted it?'
I get this. TBH it's probably best not to think too harshly about it. You are after all your own worst critic.
Also grats on reaching 100k words! I'm a little over 38% of the way there myself!
All the freaking time
Thank you so much for giving The Apple Grotto Nymph a chance. It is one of my earlier works, and not an example of me being in the flow. Still, I hope you enjoy.
You are welcome.
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I don't care what people think about me. But dogs, I desperately want dogs to like me.
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