HELL YEAAAAA

the hell, that was already 2 hours ago, god damn

CONGRATULATIONS !!!!!!!

oh today it's at 8th place

I prefer... 梵修 <- this guy/girl. The one I linked below to you.

Okay, I'll take into account all that you told me. Thank you for taking your time to write~. https://www.pixiv.net/en/users/5438311 This user picked my interest. So if my current illustrator isn't up to the challenge again. I will certainly contact this one.

Good good.... (palpatine voice)

This artist also is really high quality : https://www.pixiv.net/artworks/66868734

5) Of course it is a hobby to write but as you know yourself, there is a ultra hard balance between "writing for yourself (author) and catering to the public"

And recently, not sure in other countries but anime is now mainstream compared to years ago

Even a jp politician is fine talking in a interview talking about Vtubers

Even the news announcer in japan can joke openly about having similar hairstyle as Yor
Most west High schoolers know about animes compared to thinking it's for degenerates

Also not trying to mock the artist you picked but they probably will never rival the first cover ever. The chinese female face image you picked is a masterpiece.

He is too "generic old school fantasy" type

It won't catch the eyes like the previous one did

The previous one had it's own charm that can't found easily. Beside "looking at viewer" tag and close-up, it felt like the image had a soul because of it's original style

Look at this : https://www.youtube.com/shorts/a0_PJltzyLg
to understand more easily

Offtopic : Just like american people don't really like blondes as there are dozens of dozens (a person said to me), asians are not fan asian eyes
Animes don't have asiatic eyes (unless its a particular character)

In short, i recommend to try finding a chinese xianxia character style or jpish

PS : don't try doing a poll in your novel to ask oppinions. Internet users are not reliable for most. Even me i am not reliable. Try asking to your patreons

I didn`t complained before, though I prefer Aahn~, Ohh! guh!  more than *Moan*, anyway I like your writing so much, please keep writing, also I know writing sex scene is very difficult as it`s requiring to be not-repetitive and hot all the time, that is why most authors nowadays avoiding writing detailed sex scenes and instead writing short ones or just teasing. sorry for my bad English. thanks and best of luck. 

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Reading help to write better. To know how feel the reader pov. And to know "landmines" (bad writing) that authors sometimes do

Feelings is something both good and bad. Because of good feelings you can't see obvious problems. Because of bad feelings/prejudice you can't see the beauty of some things.

It's like having phobia of water and not knowing swimming is nice.

Also mortrexo said he expected better. He was basically scammed for this one and i feel bad about it as random people i know can doodle better

That is why i tried to help Mortrexo find another artist.

Lastly, try finding some random people (possibly not friends) that often surf the net + liking animes/mangas, and show them the cover. I bet they will say it's not good looking

Also sure some ani chara got melon boobs but it is not discordant with rest of the body (unless for funny effect). They are attractive

Hestia, is short with big breasts but she is popular/attractive

Quetzalcoatl, the blonde from Kobayashi Maid dragon, got big boobs but it's to showcase her ero contrast with the shota
+ Ilulu, is simply comedy about having too big ones so people don't take care seriously

The only recent thing i saw melon boobs and being really weird

is the manga/novel about the protagonist being a "trickster" class max lvl, wearing a white suit + hat, hence at begin of the series, he finally can get the "sage" class. He will gets 2 shorty girls with mega melon boobs

Also i repeat, this novel is high quality

One of numerous reasons of the popularity is partially due to it's really perfect first cover that fit, that used lot of luck to find, with it's quality writing that made readers addicted

I feel bad that a favorite novel/author was scammed and is forced to use a bad quality 2nd cover

Analogy : It would be as weird if coca-cola switched it's red color products to a bright pink and company having paid 1m for the idea

I hope it will help for writing

This ones are more for comedy : https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts?tags=mimonel+translated+&z=5

From same author "nonco" :

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2175636

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2274722

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2303403

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2629917

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3020035

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3411008

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/3444959

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/4357150

https://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/4357150 <-- This one is hot~ The rest are quite funny.

Yep

Somehow the quality is as high as Mimonel

I will be careful. You guys also keep a leash on me, and comment if you see it going astray! I hope we can complete this novel, and make it nice and enjoyable for everyone reading later.

Do you want to know something funny ?

You entered the highest category (personally) of writing that i can think of : the "is this author truly human ?"

Good authors ranks (low>high)

1) You forget it's written by a person

2) You want to binge it all day

3) Vet reader like it

4) Vet reader is surprised

5) Vet reader is mind blown (often)

6) Vet reader is wondering that the author is not human

Thank you, Tsuru, it is always a delight reading your comments~

Kinda belong to "childhood friends romance" category. Only connoisseurs know it's good. Unlike harem where childhood friend is always not chosen.

*Analogy senses tingling*

= It is like honey. It's clearly better then "sugar" but is honey mainstream for everything sweet ? nope

"Lazy actor" (a slightly-recent popular CN completed, where MC rebirth but born with a new identity. Realism but also wish fulfilment. Well dosed)

MORE ILLUSTRATIONS !?

WUUUUUUUUUU !!! (meme wolf sound from the famous jp comedian that is often used in YT videos)