Hello Eros, I am a big fan of your story. I was so excited when I was reading so it inspired me to write my own intake of the gender-bender genre. Unfortunately I am not a native English speaker and my amateur story suffers the consequences of a unnatural narration flow. I am asking you, NO I am begging you to help me for editing the first 10 chapters. Will you spare an hour or two to give me a hand???
in all seriousness, I am not the best editor. And while I do not mind, I work around 17 hours a day, so I really don't have time. I'm not sure if it will help but I use a text to voice app to listen to mine and that catches a lot of the mistakes and spelling errors
I try to start those chapters so everybody can read what they like. After the last chapters it'll be five or six chapters of story. Then one or two porn... and so on
work in progress but I think I figured out how to not have him become too OP in a few chapters which was the major issue. Now that I have that I can make some changes (work permitting) and start it up again