So what are your suggestion? Tell me! I am open for your thoughts.
Grammar mistakes will be present sometimes as I am typing it on a tab .it really gets hard to correct my mistakes .when I had free time ,I will edit them.
And if you are talking about the first chapters they are the premises ,I am writing for,I was analysing how reincarnation can really be possible so ,I researched while sidestepping the soul problem all together!