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Thanks for the review and I’ll try and implement some major changes. Can’t excuse the grammar problems, I’m usually on my phone and autocorrect kills me and I honestly didn’t want to dwell on editing. I’ll proofread better. This is an atypical marvel universe, it’s not mcu or 616 but more close to 9591 & AU.
Thanks for the story.
Hey Boviet. The review was definitely appreciated, but I thought it was pretty clear that the story was a dark spin on the typical Avatar story. The story is supposed to emphasize the terror that is people with system and the often ludicrous position they can force people around them into. Yes, this often involves Mind rape and other unsavory things. And like most evil dudes, Samir will get what's coming to him. I guess its fine that the story is not your cup of tea. Thanks for reading anyways.
That would have been a good warning going into it. Only saw one review saying it was slightly depressing. Hope you keep writing I know the story is good just not for me.
Thanks for the review 
Thanks for writing the novel
Thanks for the review
It's a good novel I read it all last night so in my opinion, you earned it. I'll be waiting for the chapters to build up and then I'll binge again.
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