Just something to do in my spare time.
Hi i just wanted to provide feedback, and didn't want to spoil anything on the comments section.
I think the rewrite is well done and solves most of the inconsistencyes with the plot while fleshing out the characters more and giving them a good background instead of the forced feeling they had before i.e lily.
Looking forward to how you will handle the status screens .
The novel had returned, I will have to edit some chapters though, so I decided to rewrite the first 30 or so chapters. I will not edit them here, but on Royalroad.
This should be finished in 2 or 3 days.
not gonna read them & shame of Royal Road for shooting themselves at the head. probably they should change their name to Ravaged Rusty Road.
It is not a rewrite, just a very overdue heavy editing. I changed many things in the plot, and the old chapters didn't age well. I already finished 5 and they are marked with a ⭐, so you can easily find them if you want. Think of them as the second draft of this novel, as they may require more editing in the future.
Okay, I may give them a try in the future.
Also, thank you very much for finally doing this... I appreciate it 😁
Just read the new version.
IMO, Victor goes from an opporunistic character to planner one with a Montechristo or Moriarty feeling. (Hope you read or heard of it).
Hope for a fast editing time, still waiting for Victor's proposal to Naomi. (Just to fill out the numbers of brides and for eyecandy. Even if I think Margret would LOVE for all of them to have the same "dress". Detail only known by the groom of course. Blushing brides to come when the groom grope them in public for the pictures)
Please continue the story 🥺🥺🥺
Hey I saw this was deleted from rr and wanted to know if you are planing to continue the story here. This is one of my favorite novels and I would hate to see it die. Thank you for the hard work and I hope to see this story continue
I saw this was deleted from RoyalRoad. Did something happen?
Can we Put the Character Sheet in your Profile page?
I will add it to the novel's description.
Just wandering. Will Victor soon get a mobile base like an aircraft carrier or maybe better like a heli carrier?
You are amazing...... In the next chapter there would be a foreshadowing about such a thing.
thanks for the compliment & I just realized that I forget to mention a dimensional carrier as one of the possible options earlier.
What is luliana’s last name the chapter says bluerose and the character sheet says cruze 🧐🤔
Update bro
Please update
You have mad talent I just need more
Please update
Hi, author sama, love your novels, I know you won't reply, checking my profile, I'm not a rising or well-known author, I just wanted to be friends with a famous author, so if you did want to reply, drop your discord, I'm not active here, since I just post my novel and bounce. At least thanks for reading this infamous author's message.
The Young Master in the Shadows. Good stuff. A super alpha reborn with a big harem. Scions described can be summarized as Chaotic Glorified Sheep from my point of view. all glorified sheep are fated to be lamb to the slaughter along with their flock. will be looking forward for the climax, which is the chaotic slaughter fest that is building up for them.
Love your story, I follow your releases daily!
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