Just had a horrible thought this morning. What if this life is what I am iseaiked into? What did I do that was so terrible that I got sent to this reality?
I'm not entirely sure, there are more I have introduced in later chapters I've already written, but the story has already diverged from my initial plans. I've chosen to write with the flow of the story rather than to try to force it in any specific direction. Hopefully my shallow editing doesn't bother you too much, I plan to go over them again later in more detail.
I like it so far. The idea that using something has an affect on the MC is new. Adds a consequence in deciding to do an action. Brings an over-powered character back to some reality. I look forward to seeing how the MC grows and changes.