Hello! Wanted to see if I’ve missed something. During the convo with the cardinal it’s mentioned Lia will not be allowed on the front lines after canonization, but what happens when Ren gets deployed in this ponetial future world war?
I remember there being a convo between two characters about them being excited to see what Ren can do as a commodore in future wars. Would Lia not follow her?
Promises like these were likely made to try and prevent a global conflict. If a world war happens, then there would be little reason for Cascadia to keep to it, would there? Both sides likely know this as well.
It's just a temporary change as I wanted to get away from the AI cover I had. A proper cover has been commissioned and should be done within 2 months. Perhaps I should poll next chapter as to whether this one should stay or be reverted?
I would say REVERSE it as that's where most people found your series, the Ai version give a Military like Vibes into it and make the Character look menacing and Badass while the new one gives "FANFIC" vibe so.... PLEASE change it into a badass like Thumbnail. Ex of badass Thumbnail is Ivil protagonist. It show the main character while also adding a mysterious vibe to it that draw readers on reading it.
Next chapter is delayed due to me catching some new year bug, me deepest apologies! All my bones ache and I'm constantly tired! Hopefully it clears up in a day or two!
I love the setting of Amelia Thornheart and wanted to ask if it'd be alright to use it as a base for a story written by me? I am asking because i am trying to write but somehow always end up with something ridiculously similar to your story, even if i purposefully try not to. So since i always end up doing it i thought that asking for permission to do so would be a great idea.
Are you asking to use the setting as inspiration or writing a fan-fiction in the same world? Either is fine by me and if anything, it's a huge compliment! After all, creative works are just the culmination of all of our previous experiences put together in new and interesting ways :)
Glad you've enjoyed it so far! Hopefully I can keep it up ^.^ Huge thanks for the series review btw will be sure to give you a shoutout in the upcoming chapter <3
hai! just began your story today! i'm incredibly impressed by your work, especially the worldbuilding. as someone who wants to become a writer as well, is there something you could recommend on how to *organize* your world, or your story in general? anything that you would recommend to a newbie? absolutely love amelia thorneheart! good luck for you future endeavors!
Hello thanks for the kind words :) I wrote Amelia Thornheart mostly by the seat of my pants and it's only now I'm moving to a more structured system with planning. I write in google docs with one document per chapter. As for worldbuilding/notes I generally use Scrivener where I have pages for everything from culture/religion/fauna/flora etc. I'm also looking into Aeon Timeline software to keep track of events and where characters are at certain times.
It's worth mentioning that planning too much can mean you might never get actual words out. I always thought I was a planner but have found I've been far more productive by just sitting down and seeing where the scene takes me.
i feel you. i get too lost in making up my worlds i just forget to write anything. thank you for the advice! i'll be looking forward to more of your work!