Eh, it's an interesting read, and it's more or less readable, though as I said in the comments, it's gotten way more readable, and you put out just enough that it's easy to continue reading frequently without feeling drowned in chapters. 

It is an interesting story. 

I have 2 reading lists, a public one that I'm more or less currently reading, and a private one that has a bunch of stories that I'm not currently reading due to a variety of reasons but might return to. I maintain my public one at roughly 50 to 100 stories, while my private one is up to like 230ish now. 

If you are looking for suggestions, @stonelight has a reading list of like 600+ that has a lot of the interesting stories on the site. 

I'll likely be reading your stuff for a while. As said in my review, the stuff that feels awkward, you seem to be getting better at, or perhaps I've adjusted to your style.  

Regarding the time stuff, I basically read most of your story in the last day or so, and many times I would go from one chapter to the next with a 'same day or next day' assumption because a lot kinda did that, then a character would say something to otherwise, which would mess with my internal time line. As said in the review, nothing to fix there on your side in that regards, it just kept messing with me is all. 

Thank you!