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KingIssa · Oct 11, 2023

Thanks for reading my story. Leave a comment and let me know your thoughts. 

Saberfang · Sep 16, 2023

Thank you for reading my story. Hope you're enjoying it! clear.png

GhostFace · Jun 1, 2023

Fixed the chapters so it should be good now 

GhostFace · May 31, 2023

If you’d read the rest of the chapters you’d see why they’d act like that but thank you 

OmnipotentApeGod · May 31, 2023

Im doing that right now. I do see now that what I suggested would not fit but I would still say you could have slow down how friendly friendly they seems. You could have gone for more of a this is a person I'm currently with and we are currently filling out each other type of feel.

GhostFace · May 30, 2023

Do I need to fix anything with my chapters 

OmnipotentApeGod · May 31, 2023

From what I've read so far your story is way to fast for no good reason. For example the portion in the beginning where I decided to drop the store at. It was when he first meets Aurora and they act like they knew each other since childhood. This portion makes no sense. He has zero memories from my understanding, he doesn't even know what's going on. He in that moment just found out what her name was. 

OmnipotentApeGod · May 31, 2023

So why are they acting like they know each other. If you want to fix that portion you could make them know each have already.

Arthurs · May 17, 2023

Thank you so much for reading my book.

OmnipotentApeGod · May 17, 2023

Thanks for writing

RiamuRamu · Jan 20, 2021

Glad you read Exploits From Another World. How is it?

OmnipotentApeGod · Jan 20, 2021

pretty good so far. Keep up the good work.

F8ofThe3World · Jun 15, 2020

Thanks for reading FoF! Sorry that I didn't thank you sooner, but, as you may or may not have noticed, I've been forced by my current circumstances to be away from SH for a while(but I'll be back soon, I think). Anyways, mind telling me what you think of the story so far? Also, nice...weird picture with cockroach eyes

OmnipotentApeGod · Jun 17, 2020

I like the story so far. At times I do wish that you could speed up the story a bit, But other times I think the pace just fit some of the scenes And the pic came from yt meatcanyon railroad.

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