Hey uhm. I just wanted to say that maybe you should add more tension to the story? Like adding a new villain or something if want it to be a slice of life thing than i have no right to convince you otherwise. Anyway if you do consider my idea, I'll be happy to help as a writer myself, and no I'm not asking for money. It's just hard for me to write a message that comes off too agitating.
Pick a term or phrase, ideally from the early chapters, that is rather unusual. Now go to google and search for it in quotes... try "shin grayson", it's reasonably unusual. If you did it properly you have a list of maybe a hundred or two hits, a brief skim through shows you the story posted on this site plus 2 sites scraping it (1stkissnovel and ranobes) ... add
sara outside the quotes and you get the scrapes on newsnovel and novely. Try a quoted "a vast starless sky and a beautiful full moon shining" ... now you have links for novel35, time-to-reflect... actually I got 10 hits on that search and 9 of them are the prologue posted to other sites.
See what what I'm doing here? There's other tricks to make it more effective,