Quite curious how the story will be taken after everything. Will there be a some kind of big goal or will it just end after some exposition of the divine realm? It feels like it's kinda leading up to a sort of second adventure with goddess Tamamo.
There are some things that will happen after ascension, but it won’t be another hundred or so chapters. Once the things that happen there are done, the story will be over, unfortunately.
Perhaps you should read the announcement. Also, the author(s) don't _owe_ us stories. We should be grateful for what we get, even if in the end, the story ends without an ending. It's free, after all.
Hey uhm. I just wanted to say that maybe you should add more tension to the story? Like adding a new villain or something if want it to be a slice of life thing than i have no right to convince you otherwise. Anyway if you do consider my idea, I'll be happy to help as a writer myself, and no I'm not asking for money. It's just hard for me to write a message that comes off too agitating.
I’m focusing more on the slice of life aspect, but I do thank you for the offer and critique. If you have any other suggestion, feel free to tell me either here or on the discord.
Pick a term or phrase, ideally from the early chapters, that is rather unusual. Now go to google and search for it in quotes... try "shin grayson", it's reasonably unusual. If you did it properly you have a list of maybe a hundred or two hits, a brief skim through shows you the story posted on this site plus 2 sites scraping it (1stkissnovel and ranobes) ... add
sara outside the quotes and you get the scrapes on newsnovel and novely. Try a quoted "a vast starless sky and a beautiful full moon shining" ... now you have links for novel35, time-to-reflect... actually I got 10 hits on that search and 9 of them are the prologue posted to other sites.
See what what I'm doing here? There's other tricks to make it more effective,
all without inconveniencing readers or hoping there are readers on other sites that are up to date and willing to take the time to find you on another service.
this is a copypaste from kaithar in the comment section of prelude to a New Festival it didnt have a like so i thought you didnt see it
Thank you for the tenderness of the story. Glad if you're watching the sunrise. I'm a half-blind old man, reading your story. Good luck to you, good health to you and all your family and friends