Thank you so much I will implement fewer time skips and I will also separate the author, MC, and other characters.
For one can you like go indepth with the story and not Soo many time skips and jump and also indicate when the author,Mc or someone else is speaking because I try to figure it out but some readers might not
Can you send me the link
What it's name?
I just made a series so I hope it is 👌
Please read my life's first work, fanfiction named " A laid back Pokemon Master" it's a bit of slow burn so please bear 🐻 with me Constructive critistism are more than welcome.