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Thank you for read the first three of my chapters, if you liked I'm glad! :) If not could you tell what put you off and not wanting to read anymore?
that's happening and just follows along like a clueless idiot nor does he doubt what's happening all of a sudden, yeah to me its illogical and the story lacks EMOTIONAL DEPTH not to mention that all of the above happen in BARELY more than 1 CHAPTER which as i mentioned is too fast-paced...
I apologize for that, it's my first time writing and I was just writing what felt natural. I'll try to improve.
Its fine... U asked what put me off so i gave my opinion... I am sure you will get better in time... Good Luck and please don't be too rushed and lose your motivation for writing, because a lot of authors are doing rushed work and they quickly drop the novels after running out of inspiration... Make aure to properly PLAN THE PROGRESSION OF THE STORY AHEAD WHEN WRITING...
Thank you so much for telling me :)
Thank you for trying the story out ( ˙꒳˙ )
U r welcome
Thanks for reading my guy
U r wlcome... Interesting story so far... Keep it up!
Thank you for reading my first novel here: Lawyer Magus Transmigrated to the Immortal Realm.
I am looking forward to your review when I post more chapters.
I am also looking forward to reading more...
ive seen you have read all of the chapters out on my novel. Could you give some honest feedback to me so i could improve?
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