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Thank you for the reviews! You are right - the first story had a little bit too much on the 18+ side even for my own taste. What happened is that i started writing that story on a full NSFW site and, as a first time author, i felt obligated to follow the line so to say. Especially in the early chapters.
You can see how my style of writing changed and calmed down somewhat and that is likely the pace it would continue from now on.
I am currently editing the 1st book so that I can publish it on other sites and toning down some of the chapters is in the works.
I completely understand about 18+ stuff. I sort of assumed that was the case by the way you progressed the story and how it toned down to a more natural scenes. And it's not like I'm against steamy stuff
I did love the part about triangle on a sphere. It is a fairly simple thing that anyone can visualise (especially with such a masterful guidance :)), yet the whole field of Non-Euclidean geometry is a relatively modern discovery which fits the world.
It was one of the ways I try to research new ideas - not just what we consider "modern" but what could be honestly out of their reach despite them not being stupid. Things that require a significant shift from established routines. Not only does it add plausibility but it also does not diminish their intelligence.
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