With the base idea of the story, setting, plot, the characters, their backstories and your writing quality, you should have been all set man. They’re all top notch. Then the MC steps in and is an immediate stick in the mud. He’s completely incomprehensible.
That and I tend to be an overly critical asshole with the star rating on this site to make up for all the people handing out free 5 stars and essentially invalidating the whole review system.