Glad to hear it. I’m definitely interested in giving it another go now.

Your idea of no skill may be a bit different than everyone else’s lol. The effort you’ve put in absolutely shows. It’s solid story with no holes I could even try to poke let alone actual issues.

I also appreciate the lack of rough surprises and the general relationship stability of the main characters. Those are rare qualities in a story these days. 

The story has different priorities (and is geared toward older audiences). While I try to make relationships appear realistic, there are already plenty of other plot-diving conflicts that I need to juggle. At the same time, most characters are sufficiently mature and/or actively avoid such conflicts due to a cultural bias.

With the base idea of the story, setting, plot, the characters, their backstories and your writing quality, you should have been all set man. They’re all top notch. Then the MC steps in and is an immediate stick in the mud. He’s completely incomprehensible.

That and I tend to be an overly critical asshole with the star rating on this site to make up for all the people handing out free 5 stars and essentially invalidating the whole review system.