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Jun 30, 2022

Joined: Jun 30, 2022
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RandomReviewer · Mar 19, 2023

Oh nice, I finally found someone I can leech recommendations off of because they don't 5 start everything under the sun.

Snusmumriken · Aug 20, 2022

Thank you for the review. Although i have to admit that there was no skill as it was my first novel ever. I substituted that with a ton of edits and revisions just to avoid plot holes as much as I could. Mostly because I didn't like obvious short cuts in other stories and tried to avoid them in mine as much as I could.

Drag7 · Aug 25, 2022

Your idea of no skill may be a bit different than everyone else’s lol. The effort you’ve put in absolutely shows. It’s solid story with no holes I could even try to poke let alone actual issues.

I also appreciate the lack of rough surprises and the general relationship stability of the main characters. Those are rare qualities in a story these days. clear.pngclear.png

Snusmumriken · Aug 25, 2022

The story has different priorities (and is geared toward older audiences). While I try to make relationships appear realistic, there are already plenty of other plot-diving conflicts that I need to juggle. At the same time, most characters are sufficiently mature and/or actively avoid such conflicts due to a cultural bias.

XKARNATION · Aug 9, 2022

Thanks for the review I guess? clear.png

Drag7 · Aug 9, 2022

With the base idea of the story, setting, plot, the characters, their backstories and your writing quality, you should have been all set man. They’re all top notch. Then the MC steps in and is an immediate stick in the mud. He’s completely incomprehensible.clear.png

That and I tend to be an overly critical asshole with the star rating on this site to make up for all the people handing out free 5 stars and essentially invalidating the whole review system. 

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