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I'm a simple man with simple tastes. You could probably tell that based off my Reading List though.

KoolAidDogan · · Aug 28, 2023

I'm honestly surprised the first thing that got me blocked by someone was saying their main character had an incel thought process for thinking a woman being forward with her advances was "a waste of a great face."

KoolAidDogan · Aug 28, 2023

Could've thought it was just the character being scummy, but I guess the author himself was lol. I mean, the character mind controlled a girl into trusting him and then forced her to be horny, but somehow I'm supposed to not think he's a rotten bastard for it? Aight.

Called "The First Great Game" or something.

Feniurme · Nov 17, 2023

Thank you for reviewing my fanfic. All the points you talked about were true. The danmachi fanfic was my first attempt at writing and rereading the older chapters and even some of the more recent ones, I agree that they're pretty shit HAHAHA. Have a nice day dude. Happy you gave some constructive criticsm!

AverageMaidLover · Aug 31, 2023

Thanks for the review!  Could you let me know what kind of grammatical or spelling mistakes I'm making?

KoolAidDogan · Aug 31, 2023

I replied in DMs o/

Potatas · Jul 14, 2023

Ty for pointing out that the "would" problem was still present! I could've sworn I fixed most of them a while ago but after looking through my story again I found em (and then axed them). And of course if you happen to stumble on more of em, let me know. 

KoolAidDogan · Jul 14, 2023

Ah... Well, I didn't want to be that guy who posted a bunch of grammar fixes, but sure thing. I'll put it all in a spoiler and try and make it easy enough to spot in editing if I do.

Potatas · Jul 14, 2023

Could always just pm me them if you don't want to comment.

ChocolateLover030 · May 23, 2023

Thanks for the review. I have since fixed my writing mistakes.

Appreciate the grammar police knocking on my story. Hopefully, it won't need another coming. clear.png

KoolAidDogan · May 24, 2023

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