I'm honestly surprised the first thing that got me blocked by someone was saying their main character had an incel thought process for thinking a woman being forward with her advances was "a waste of a great face."

Thank you for reviewing my fanfic. All the points you talked about were true. The danmachi fanfic was my first attempt at writing and rereading the older chapters and even some of the more recent ones, I agree that they're pretty shit HAHAHA. Have a nice day dude. Happy you gave some constructive criticsm!

Thanks for the review!  Could you let me know what kind of grammatical or spelling mistakes I'm making?

Ty for pointing out that the "would" problem was still present! I could've sworn I fixed most of them a while ago but after looking through my story again I found em (and then axed them). And of course if you happen to stumble on more of em, let me know. 

Thanks for the review. I have since fixed my writing mistakes.

Appreciate the grammar police knocking on my story. Hopefully, it won't need another coming.